What is meant to be !
The bistro was dimly lit. The walls were filled with classic murals. He sat there flipping through the monthly sports local magazine. He was casually dressed in a grey button down shirt and jeans. He finished his coffee, it was an hour now and he knew she would not come.
It was their third year together. He had asked for one dinner and she had reluctantly agreed. He hoped to make things right. The fights had begun to turn deep. It had affected his career. He had been spared of the previous match. His coach had yelled at him for losing out on those several early morning practise sessions.
He looked out of the window for one last look and there she stood in a yellow evening dress. He smiled and thought of the sentence he would begin the conversation with.He had a hundred thoughts running in his mind. He was framing the right compliment. He did not want this to go wrong.
She entered and walked up to him. They just looked at each other. Words failed him. He was so overwhelmed to see her standing before him that he almost did not hear what she said.
‘Ryan, it’s over’ !
Lying in his bed, he was still thinking if this is what she had said.
The phone rang. The machine played it for him. It was Coach yeller in his loudest tone ordering Ryan to be back on the field the next morning.
He now knew what to chase and that was something he was good at. Unlike his relationship he did not have to think which way to run or how hard to kick to the goal. He was simply good at it. Ryan, the soccer dude was back on track !!!
July 10, 2011 at 1:07 pm
oooohhhhh mmmmyyyyyy gggooooodddd….amazing gal…i loved it ….both were amzing…loved the second one better….seriously good..though hard to believe tht u have wrote it..;)…heheh well just keep up the good work and make me proud beta…:D…all the best..i wanna read more ok…so keep up coming…cheers
July 13, 2011 at 2:54 pm
hey i liked it..you are good at writing such stuff man.am waiting for the next one,so bettter be fast!!!!
July 22, 2011 at 7:52 pm
ohhh dis 1 ended soon.. 😦 u shud hv continued.. write more.. :):):)
July 23, 2011 at 5:59 am
amrita- *kicks* it is indeed my work.lol..thanks so much for the support.like always, thank u means so little ! 🙂 yet !
July 23, 2011 at 6:00 am
varsha- thanks gurl 🙂 i will try to improve my pace !
July 23, 2011 at 6:01 am
dhatri- i thought so too. i’l rectify this issue 🙂
January 8, 2012 at 7:52 pm
Hey I liked.. agreed with dhatri though.. 🙂
will read others too soon
February 28, 2012 at 4:47 am
Subtle, embodied with immense emotions that are implicit. It also potrays the individuality of charracters through the difference in the perceptions and thinking. Also explains the bondage and its effect which could either be the strenght or otherwise. could also get the glimpse of what the author wanted to imply. Sneek, Peek. 🙂
Very intricate piece of work. Enjoyed it.